Notes on "Pharmacy Sketch" by Jon Butler

Subscriber Sketch #5

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If you’re new here, you may not be aware that every other week (ish) I provide notes on sketches written by subscribers like you. I try to give feedback just like I would if the sketches were brought into a writers’ room or a writing class. Today’s post is the fifth subscriber sketch featured on Chuffah. All subscriber sketch notes and the ability to submit sketches for review are accessible to premium members. If this feature sounds interesting to you, consider getting a paid subscription! You can poke around the archives for $5/month, or commit to a full year for less than a buck a week. Or just stick with the free subscription, and I’ll have more sweet, sweet content for you next week.